What with all the kerfuffle and to-do over the last few days I’m once again in danger of losing my coveted FF membership, were it not for the wonderful Rochelle and her eternal patience then I probably would be out on my backside in the dusty Worcestershire countryside.
So America, America, what do we think of this one, from J Hardy Carroll? My knowledge is sketchy but I believe that today in the train in which I am sitting on my way to London, is Independence Day, when we celebrate America freeing itself from extraterrestrials in the early part of this century. If it wasn’t for David Icke eh?
So here goes…
On My Marks,
Get Set,
GO!!!
Following Jack Spratt’s wife’s accident, he had taken to the carnivore diet like a chainsaw to a virgin rainforest. Everyday he forgot he should remember his wife whatever her name was.
He desired radical change. Relatives’ reminiscences of her vexed him.
America; home of all things meat beckoned. When he saw Lady Gaga in a Neck & Clod dress that was the final straw.
“I must have something’s flesh” he shouted to no-one in particular as he bid Adieu to Newcastle.
Greasy Corner in Arkansas; sadly ironic as he tucked into the $2.99 Combo; dripping dripping down his chin, remembering June Spratt.
Boom! on a train, 100 words!! Pleased I am, and I hope you like it.
Doesn’t he have to avoid fat?
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No his wife died and he went meat and fat mad, that’s the point. He crumbled
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I loved “like a chainsaw to a virgin rainforest”
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It’s happening under our noses. Shocking stuff
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A (your) brilliant mind was at work with this story. Too many predatory behaviors roaming about these days. If you’re not the predator, your the prey in America. I read something not long ago, where someone said if you see an agency with no visible product, you are the commodity (e.g. social service agencies.)
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Well thank you so much, it’s comments like these that keep me going!! 😁
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You are very welcome, Shrawley, and I’m glad.
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Thanks
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p.s. your = you’re
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It was no accident, June was spread across the Bar-B-Q after being turned into chops with the chain saw. You can’t get out of this one Jack -you’re going down. Fun read.
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I usually understand all your references, but Lady Gaga in a neck & clod dress? Nope, don’t understand. Probably in part because I don’t follow her, and I just don’t know what “neck and clod” means. Help!
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Neck and clod is a cut of beef and Lady Gaga once went to an awards ceremony in a dress made of meat! Ugh!!!
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Thank you. I vaguely remember that hideous “dress.” And I did look up “neck and clod” but nothing that came up made sense. Now it all does. And yes, we like our beef, but please–not all of us are carnivores plus nothing. 🙂
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I know, it was more of a cliched stereotype than the truth, I’m sure. As with all this stuff I just make it up without regarding the truth. I googled funny named places in America, turns out Greasy Corner is an actual place in Arkansas, thought that fitted the bill for a burger joint as anywhere else. 😜
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Place names are interesting. Really good stories behind a lot of them 🙂
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Dear Shrawley,
Oh dear, I looked up neck and clod. I could see Lady Gaga doing that. Here in America we do stand for beef. They don’t call the standard American diet SAD for nothing. 😉 I imagine Jack is a bit heavier than he used to be when June was alive. Funny stuff.
Shalom,
Rochelle
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Thanks Rochelle, yep i liked neck and clod, isn’t it delightful!
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in mourning, it looks like he’s eating himself to death. he needs professional help.
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Just wait until his body goes into ketosis and his cholesterol goes sky-high.
Great take, as per, Sir Shrawls!
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Thanks Dale, Ive been watching cricket at Lords in london today, its been tricky to find time to read the FF gangs stuff, but it will!!
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I hear you… We are allowed to live too, yanno!
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Had some cracking IPA today, thought you should be made aware of this!!
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And now I’m thirsty! Since it is my Saturday evening, I think I’ll join you! Virtually, if course.
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Bottoms up!
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Went on a date, had me a Kilkenny…beer was good…
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If it’s cheap meat you want, I guess Arkansas is the place to go!
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I’m not so sure, Iain. After the endless rain and flooding in the south and southwest this spring, I suspect beef prices are going to be on the rise.
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I love that this silly little story has turned into
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A serious debate on environmental economics
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It’s as good as anywhere else I’d imagine
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The comments are “almost” as funny as your story! Well done..
My take on the photo: https://dbmcnicol.com/friday-fictioneers-declaration/
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Now I’m desperate for a lump of rump and a pint of frothing ale – and it’s all your fault!
My tale – The Flag
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I’m glad! It’s a fine day for it!!
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Greasy corner looks to be an interesting place. In expensive too. The place and the meal brought June Spratt’s name back to his mind.
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A funny story, Shrawley. After seeing a film about a slaughterhouse at high school, my son was a vegetarian for years. He has now backslid. I eat chicken and fish but killing a cow is illegal here in India so no beef. I’ve read we should do without so many cows as it’s terrible for the environment. If it comes to a choice between breathing and eating beef, I’ll choose to breathe every time. 🙂 — Suzanne
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Quite right Suzanne, we eat too much meat here, but chicken and pork are faves! I do love a good steak, but very rarely eat them, my friend in the village is a specialist beef farmer, so we buy a meat box from him once or twice a year, it’s an indulgence I know. Having said that my wife and I are trying to lose weight and so I’m experimenting a lot more with veg and pulses etc.
Thanks for reading, it’s lovely to get chatting with folk from all over the world. Where do you live in India?
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I live in the city of Pune in the Western Ghats, mountains on the west coast of India in Maharashtra state. 🙂 — Suzanne
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A lot of things for Jack to enjoy now when he’s untethered from the dietary chains of his wife.
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