Ok lets go, 2 in a row and the days are getting longer, and Friday Fictioneers are still here under the protectorship of the wonderful Rochelle, good work sister. But of a gloomy moody picture this week, so i wonder what will fall out of may brain onto the page, lets see.
On My Marks…
Get Set…
GO!!!
Bazza Barrington, clumsy when sober graceless when drunk, had broken his ankle whilst pleasuring the one he loved; an act of onanism interrupted as he slipped off the oily kitchen window sill into his serpentariam freeing the Reticulated python, Gazza., and shattering reinforced glass all over the paterned carpet tiles.
Gazza slithered away.
Bazza; leafless save for an integument of fuzzy oily fluff, lay procumbent amongst the filthy artificial pasturage, in a considerable amount of pain.
Days later, squinting out through the snake-breath tainted glass, he remembered a film…
Frowning…
“Rear Window.” he sneered, ” he certainly wasn’t no Jimmy Stewart”
The Count Of North Clifton 
How interesting. I thought of Rear Window too when I was considering what to write (didn’t go with it though)
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Great minds, I thought a less glossy one would suit
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Well there you go. There’s a lesson there somewhere.
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Your brain was overflowing! Nice one.
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Thanks, that snd the thesaurus!
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Good thing he kept Gazza well-fed or the ending may have been a bit different.
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Who knows where Gaza is??!!!…
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🙂
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i felt dizzy with all the big words i learned today. 🙂
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And me!!
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Dear Shrawley,
Wow. That was certainly disturbing. Slithering off to other things now.
Shalom,
Rochelle
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Well now… That was a mouthful!
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Not a nice outcome for poor Bazza, and I hope Gazza can survive out in the big wide world. Love the words.
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Delightfully disgusting.
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Isn’t that exactly how Jimmy Stewart broke his leg in Rear Window? That was entertaining.
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honestly, i am a bit confused.
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Hahaha! You really did make me laugh out loud! Poor old Bazza…a little more attention to personal hygiene, and some contact with other humans and he might have been rescued from the broken serpentarium by a friend.
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